He awoke at dawn of the next morning and began his journey,
he had packed all he needed and felt that he was prepared for the road that was
ahead of him. The first obstacle he faced was a monstrous maze that seemed to
have no end; only few had ever made it out. For Martin though this maze seemed
to pose very little threat as he finished the maze in a matter of only a few
hours. Next he had to cross a rushing river without getting swept away by the
force of the current. Again he seemed to prevail in the obstacle as he built a
bridge out of wood to safely cross over the river. Days went by and he
continued to succeed in this challenges he was presented with.
Image Source: Maze
The end.
Authors Note: I am retelling the story of The
Man who Went to Wake his Luck. In this original story a man is on a journey
to wake his luck and along the way the man is approached by many to have his
ask the luck why they have been cursed lately. He locates the luck and asks all
the questions, then reports the answers to the others. At the very end he ends
up getting eaten by a wolf. I decided to change most of the story and only keep
the idea of luck the same!
Bibliography: Persian
Tales, translated
by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer, illustrated by Hilda Roberts (1919).
What an interesting story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading through it, I liked the way you explained what obstacles he had to go through in order to get his luck back! I would have liked to know exactly why it vanished in the first place, but maybe it was just that he needed to prove he deserved his luck? Either way, I enjoyed the story and thought you wrote it very well :)
ReplyDeleteFirst of all love your choice of title. It is very attractive in drawing readers in. I really enjoyed how you completely made the story your own but kept a small aspect of the original story to give your story a plot. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. I think it’s awesome how he had to gain his luck back. Good job
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your storytelling for this week! I don't really know what the original story was about but I liked your version. Honestly, I feel like Martin must have still had a little bit of luck in him since he got through all of those challenges. As SJ said I would really like to know why it vanished and also I am interested to see how he got his luck in the first place. Was he born with it? Did he just stumble upon it? Overall you did very well and I look forward to future stories.
ReplyDeleteI like that you changed the ending of this story. It is a much happier ending when someone does not get eaten by a wolf. One of the other stories I read this week ended with a man being torn to pieces by a wolf, so this story was a little less depressing! Haha great job of taking the theme of the original story and turning into your own creative storytelling!
ReplyDeleteI read this story too! Yours is definitely very different, but I really liked it! I like that you kept "luck" as the central theme and made your story revolve around that. I'm glad your character was rewarded unlike the man in the original story. It's definitely much more lighthearted than the original haha. Overall, I think you did a really good job!
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